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Chapter 4 – The Wanted Legends
The smoke over the destroyed town rose like a black storm, twisting upward into the clouds as alarms screamed across every surviving street.
News drones buzzed through the air. Military sirens wailed. Every screen lit up with one message:
**EARTH EMERGENCY ALERT —
REFLEXO DIAMOND, ZENTO, KAISER LENS: EXTREMELY DANGEROUS**
Reflexo stared at the broadcast from the hillside, chest heaving, his light dim and flickering after the battle.
"Great," Kaiser muttered, dragging a hand down his face. His palm still burned from the fire he had unleashed. "We save the city and they put us on a most-wanted list. Nice."
"We… did destroy half the town," Zento said quietly.
Kaiser glared. "That was you and your demon freak-out!"
Zento lifted his hands. "I SAID I WAS SORRY!"
A spark jumped between his fingers, making him flinch.
Reflexo stood between them.
"Guys, NOT now. We need to vanish until we figure out what the hell is happening."
Above them, helicopters sliced through the sky.
"Reflexo Diamond," a voice announced from a megaphone.
"You are ordered to surrender immediately. You too, Kaiser Lens. And Zento—"
"Why do they say my name with extra anger?" Zento whispered.
"Because you literally shot lightning through a school," Kaiser replied.
"That was the DEMON—"
"Shh!"
Reflexo pointed toward the dense forest. "Move!"
The three sprinted into the trees as floodlights swept across the hillside. Bullets hit the ground behind them. Zento threw up a crackling shield of electricity. Kaiser blasted apart falling tree trunks with fire. Reflexo used short bursts of light to blind the drones.
Within minutes, they were deep in the forest—breathing hard, exhausted, and absolutely lost.
Kaiser leaned against a tree. "Okay. Whoever's controlling Earth's government is FAST. They already put our faces everywhere."
"They're only reacting like this because they don't understand magic," Reflexo said.
"They don't understand YOU," Kaiser corrected.
"Mr. Exploding-Sun-Light-Beam."
Reflexo didn't respond. He was thinking about something else…
Someone else.
His sister.
Zento noticed the silence. His voice softened.
"I know I can't undo what happened. But I swear—I'm in control now."
A crackle of blue energy crawled up his arm.
"…Mostly."
Kaiser groaned. "We're gonna die."
Reflexo said nothing.
Then—
A twig snapped.
Kaiser immediately ignited his hands with fire. "Whoever that is, you better say hello before I turn this forest into a barbecue!"
A calm voice replied, "Relax, spicy boy."
From behind a tree stepped a tall man wearing a black cloak. His hair was silver-white, his eyes glowing red like molten blood. He carried no weapon, but the air around him felt strange—heavy yet peaceful.
Reflexo tensed. "Who are you?"
The man grinned.
"Someone who just saved your lives."
He snapped his fingers.
Suddenly, every drone and helicopter overhead froze mid-air—like time stopped. They hung in the sky, motionless, silent.
Zento's jaw dropped. "Uhh… did you… break physics?"
"No," the man said casually. "I just hacked gravity for a few seconds."
Kaiser whispered, "Bro. That's not possible."
The man winked. "I'm Renox Leg."
Reflexo stepped back. "Renox…? As in the Infinite Blood Magician?"
Renox bowed with a dramatic flourish.
"The one and only."
Kaiser whispered, "That sounds like a horror movie villain…"
Zento nudged him. "Shut up, he froze helicopters."
Renox motioned with a finger.
"Boys, follow me before Earth's military decides to drop bombs."
None of them needed convincing.
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Renox's House — The Weirdest Safe House Ever
After ten minutes of walking deeper into the forest, they stumbled upon a strange sight:
A small wooden cabin surrounded by floating rocks, glowing runes, and a mailbox shaped like a demon head.
Kaiser stared.
"…Is this a horror house or a circus?"
Renox unlocked the door.
"It's home. Don't judge. I built it when I was drunk."
Inside, the house was… surprisingly normal. A couch. Bookshelves. A fridge covered in stickers. A coffee table shaped like a coffin. Nothing too strange.
Then the fridge door opened by itself.
A carton of milk floated out, poured itself into a mug, and drifted back inside.
Kaiser pointed.
"Okay. Now I'm judging."
Renox sat on the couch and motioned for them to sit.
"Let me start with what you need to understand first."
His eyes turned serious.
"Earth is only one world out of millions."
Zento blinked. "Millions?"
"Yes," Renox continued.
"We live in the Omniverse—a collection of realities, each with different laws of magic. Some worlds are peaceful. Some are violent. Some have gods. Some have monsters. Some have both."
He leaned forward.
"Earth is the weakest of all magical worlds. The humans here panic at anything they can't explain. That's why you three are wanted."
"But we didn't do anything wrong," Reflexo said.
Kaiser deadpanned. "We did destroy a whole town."
Renox laughed. "Only Earth believes that makes you criminals. In most worlds, it'd get you a medal."
Zento scratched his head. "So we're criminals here… but heroes somewhere else?"
"Exactly."
Reflexo crossed his arms. "So why are you helping us?"
Renox smiled widely.
"Because I know your potential. All three of you."
He pointed at Reflexo.
"Light magic that nearly rivals celestial beings."
He pointed at Kaiser.
"Fire that grows stronger the more damage you take. A fighter with monster instincts."
Then at Zento.
"A cursed demon spark inside you—dangerous, but powerful."
"It's not a demon," Zento muttered. "It's an… issue."
Kaiser whispered, "Your issue tried to kill us all."
Renox clapped once.
"Anyway!"
He stood and walked to a bookshelf.
"What you three need now… is training."
"Training?" Reflexo asked.
"Yes," Renox said, pulling out a thick book with a glowing red cover.
"At the Extreme Magic Academy."
The room seemed to darken as he spoke.
"It is the greatest academy across the Omniverse. A place where the strongest beings learn to master their powers."
Kaiser leaned forward. "What kind of people study there?"
Renox grinned.
"Dragons. Demons. Gods. Spirits. Monsters. The insane. The powerful. And… you three."
He tossed the book onto the table.
Zento opened it and saw a list:
EXTREME MAGIC RANKS
Rank SSS — Celestial & World-Breakers
Rank SS — High Demons, Dragon Lords
Rank S — Archmages, Ancient Spirits
Rank A — Advanced Mages
Rank B — Skilled Users
Rank C — Average Magic Users
Rank D — Low Users
Rank F — Humans with no magic
Reflexo frowned. "What rank are we?"
Renox smirked.
"You three? Easily Rank S. Maybe higher with training."
Kaiser nearly fell off the couch.
"S?!"
"That means we're above dragons," Zento whispered.
"No," Renox corrected.
"It means dragons will want to eat you."
Kaiser froze.
"…We're going to die. Again."
Renox patted his head like he was a puppy.
"Relax. You'll be fine. Probably."
Reflexo stood. "Tell us what we need to do."
Renox folded his arms.
"You must leave Earth. Immediately. Before the Global Hunters arrive."
Zento swallowed. "Hunters?"
Renox nodded.
"The Earth Government doesn't fight with armies. They send… THEM."
"Who are they?" Reflexo asked.
Renox's smile faded.
"The Null Agents. Humans turned into magic-killing machines."
Kaiser flinched. "Magic-killing what?!"
"They erase magic with a touch," Renox said.
"And they're already on the way."
A distant thunder rolled across the sky.
Reflexo looked toward the window.
"We need to move."
Renox's eyes gleamed.
"Correct. Chapter 5 of your lives begins now."
The house shook.
A robotic voice echoed from outside:
"TARGETS DETECTED."
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