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Maryanne’s Deliverance

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This work, dated October 26, 2025, presents a compelling, multi-generational tale of spiritual struggle and redemption. Summary of the Narrative The story unfolds across timelines, beginning in January 1990 on an Iowa farmhouse amid a fierce storm. It centers on Margaret Jones, who cradles her infant daughter Sarah while confronting an ominous intrusion by strangers—implied harbingers of darkness—testing the family’s faith. This flashback establishes a foundational battle for Sarah’s soul, resolved through parental resolve and an invocation of light over shadow. The narrative then shifts to 2025, where Sarah—now Maryanne’s mother—perishes in a car crash, leaving Maryanne, who is pregnant and overwhelmed by grief, adrift. In a moment of vulnerability within a fog-shrouded park, Maryanne encounters a piercing declaration: “Jesus loves you.” This summons her not merely to flee but to confront an internal turmoil, blending maternal fear with a profound spiritual calling. The prose evokes a visceral tension between the mundane and the ethereal, culminating in themes of inheritance, loss, and divine intervention. This piece stands out for its atmospheric prose and layered exploration of faith as a bulwark against despair, potentially evoking a sense of cathartic release—much like a personal “deliverance” from one’s burdens.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Flashback The Strangers' Arrival – January 1990 

"The January rain lashed the Jones farmhouse, turning

the Iowa plains into a blur of shadow." Margaret rocked six-month-old

Sarah in the dim kitchen, her eyes on the storm. Each drop tapped the windows—a

cold reminder. Sarah's chest rose and fell like a gentle lullaby. Margaret

clung to the fragile hope of simplicity, but beneath the rhythm, an unseen

pressure pressed close, hunting blood.  

"Benjamin!" she called, voice tight. Her husband,

cleaning his shotgun by the fireplace, set it down with a farmer's wariness.

Trouble, he knew, often wore a human face. Through the rain-streaked window, he

saw two figures on the porch—cloaked in black, soaked to the bone: their forms

blurred like shadows in water.  

"Please!" a woman's voice cut through. "Our

car broke down. We need help!"  

Margaret's maternal instinct overrode Benjamin's caution.

Shifting Sarah to one arm, she unlatched the door. The strangers stumbled in,

with a smell of wet dog and a faint whiff of desperation. The man, tall with

jet-black hair and battle-worn eyes, extended a trembling hand. Roman

Thorne—this is my wife, Minnie. The streets are cold as ice tonight.  

Minnie, small and sharp-featured, wrung her coat, her

fingers dancing nervously. Her gaze locked on Sarah, an intensity that made

Benjamin's skin prickle. She murmured, her voice soft but heavy with an unsaid

guilt, "What a beautiful child. Sorry if we troubled you."  

"Nonsense," Margaret said warmly. "You're

freezing. Benjamin, fetch blankets, please."  

As Margaret bustled about, brewing coffee one-handed,

Benjamin watched the strangers.  

Roman's gaze lingered on Sarah; Minnie's fingers traced

faint, vanishing patterns on the table. The house felt heavier; the rain's

rhythm pressed into the walls, intrusive and wrong.  

That night, Margaret woke to a faint hum, sung underwater.

Sarah slept peacefully, but the air pressed in, thick with the scent of decay.

Downstairs, the Thornes knelt by the fire, their voices weaving a chant in a

tongue that twisted her stomach. "What are you doing?" she

whispered.  

They turned, their eyes away from the fire, as if rudely

interrupted.  

"Praying," Minnie said, "for your child's

salvation." They held something between their palms, almost as if they

were worshiping it.  

Margaret, both spooked and intrigued, asked, "What is

that thing in your hands?"  

Minnie replied, "Something that will change everything

for you."  

Margaret questioned, "What could be better than the

life I already have?"  

Roman said, "Knowing you spared a life by ending it. A

life that is unborn never sees evil."  

Margaret said, "You sound like you've been through a

lot… but I think you might have a point."  

Roman apologized, "Sorry, my facetiousness is showing.

We won't harm your family while we are under your roof, we

promise."  

Minnie added, "Yes, we promise."  

Margaret said, "Thanks. I'll try to convince Benjamin

to let you stay as long as you need. Sorry for interrupting your

prayer."  

Minnie said, "It's okay, Margaret, and thanks

again!" She then whispered under her breath, "She has not a

clue."  

Roman said, "Yes, thanks, since you welcomed us in.

We'll try to get back on our feet fast, I promise."  

Margaret said, "You're welcome again. Just

sleep well."