So, there were some things I had disliked in some chapters, and I saw a few comments criticising what I already didn't like. I had posted it anyway because I lacked time to change things and didn't want to make another day without a chapter, and didn't want to change something I had already posted. But decided now to do it anyways.
So, if you wish to see, I made changes to chapters 8 and 10. You will most likely notice the change once you read it.
This is probably the first and last time I do something like that, as I will not post something I disliked again.
Hope you enjoy the changes.
This chapter will be erased before the next one is posted. Sorry, for disappointing.