Cherreads

Naina, stop knocking on trouble's door!!

Snow_blue_55
7
chs / week
The average realized release rate over the past 30 days is 7 chs / week.
--
NOT RATINGS
763
Views
Synopsis
Being with foul temper and hot-headed character, Naina had to play the role of a villainess in her own novel! Attached to annoyed system, completing the chaotic missions and lastly ending her life, could she complete her mission and return to her world?
VIEW MORE

Chapter 1 - Chapter :1 True art piece

A popular novel "Misfortune that returns" has been sold at a crazy rate, and the most unexpected thing is that the buyers are mostly women.

In the novel, there is a girl named Kavya, the protagonist, and the book was focused on how she went from rag to rich, her life at early was filled with misfortune but after her encounter with the male lead, her days of happiness were in sight.

And you would ask what is so rare about it? There are thousands of novels that consist of the same typical story, so what makes this novel become the best selling book?

The answer to the question is that the girl named Kavya turned out to be the villainess at the end, she was not at all pitiful in fact the bullying she received so that she can gain male lead attention has been a well deployed plan.

Her character that was described, delicate and gentle, a flower that blooms on the misfortune, had all been false, and at the last segment of the book that was revealed. 

Kavya by then had already achieved her goal of killing the real female lead and her family, the male lead had a seizure attack when he saw her rambling about her misdeed.

But at last the male lead was male lead, he didn't hesitate when he saw injustice and then he killed Kavya with his hand, marking the ending of the novel.

The author who had been laying in the bed of money thought to herself, "Ahh, sweet sweet money! Come here my babies, mommy work so hard to earn you!"

She was rolling in money, excitement couldn't be contained, her face full of a grin that reached her ears, and after having a good time with her hard earned money babies, she got up and opened her laptop, reading the comment of her novel.

The comments flashing on the screen-

[Lilyissleepy: Wow! The plot twist was crazy, I didn't even realize all this time I was supporting the villainess.]

[Turnthesun: Pah! What was crazy?? It was just a garbage plot twist, wasting my coins!]

[Callmebeauty: Tbh, the plot didn't impress me that much, earlier chapter was quite interesting but the ending didn't satisfy me.]

[Kavyaisvillainess: Hey! What are you all talking about, it was a great story, don't talk shit about it, and Kavya really slayed!!]

[Turnthesun: I doubt your sense of great then, and at the end Kavya was the one who got slayed by her husband! This novel is trash, how can it be popular!]

[Lilyissleepy: You with the ID 'Turnthesun' do you have any problem with the novel? The characters were really carefully designed! Don't spread hate here if you don't have anything to do!]

[Kavyaisvillainess: Good sister, +1]

[Turnthesun: Lame! The characters were just 2D, it seems the author is a novice and just piled her broken fantasy into a novel and made it seem like it's a masterpiece, tsk, tsk!]

[Turnthesun: And the story just makes no sense, Kavya goes from rag to rich, killing the female family and her, and at last for her crimes she gets slashed by the male lead! You all tell me where is the f***king storyline???]

[Callmebeauty: +1, I felt the same bro! The protagonist just feels like a fool more than the actual villains, she just killed the family and then got killed, well, what villainess does her job so poorly! I bet the author just turned her into villainess at the last moment expecting readers to react like, 'Woah!! What a great turn of tables! Look, look, the heroine is actually a villainess! Oh my God, what a great plot!" and I'm surprised that there are fools that feel for these things.]

[Turnthesun: Hahahaha….it seems we are the only ones with a true sense of novel!]

Don't know how long it has been since she was staring at the screen surface of her laptop but it feels like it has been some time now.

"These people really don't know how to appreciate a true piece of art! Pah! Trash novel? Huh? Have you known the pain of writing and coming with ideas? Do you know the pain of staying up late at night and willing to write long chapters! Have you? Have you?"

Naina had lost her calm after reading those negative comments, howling like a wolf at a prey for running so fast and almost draining her energy to catch it! 

Whatever, after the quick anger she opened her laptop again, but this time she did not go to the comment section but made an announcement.

"Okky! If this has come to this then it seems it leaves me with no choice, people who said my writing feels like that of a novice, come on! Let me show you my real talent~"

Her eyes flaring as if she just drank an energy drink and brimming with energy that even her laptop seems to have felt, thinking 'Uhh, where is this flame coming from!'

{Announcement, my palllss!!

As I have seen some people dissatisfied with my work, I'm thinking of re-writing the story with some new twist and new villainary. 

Thanks to those cute bunnies out there that showed me love that I've come so far.

Continue to show me love as it gimme fuel to write stories for you all my lovelies!!

And also to haters who are so loyal that they read my work first then spit poison in the comment, you all are also precious as to improve my vocabs with your new mocking words for my novel.

So this is all, now I'm going to work on it, pray for my success guyssss!!

Your most talented Naina.}

After posting it, she felt quite good actually. She looked at the screen for a while but her throat felt a little dry so she pulled the chair and walked to the kitchen while stretching her body.

Her thoughts are already taking in the path of becoming a more unhinged villainess, well they said, the protagonist was a fool for villainess then she would show them what an actual villainess behaves like!

While she filled the glass, her laptop screen was flashing with comments under her announcement.

[Lilyissleepy: !!! Omg new story with new twist! I'm here for it, and Naina you ate with that reply to haters!]

[Kavyaisvillainess: +1, I'll be patiently waiting for it. Guys we will get an unhinged villainess!!]

….

There were many comments like above, some were excited, surprised and shocked, all kinds of emotions were there. 

However, a sudden robotic sound was heard, and the laptop screen crash pitch black, just as it seem it had closed, the screen flash again but there was written,

{{ System assigning is in process...System assigning is in process….System assigning is in process…}}

Noticing something, Naina walked to the room, seeing that her laptop was malfunctioning again, she tried to repair it, tapping the power off button, however, its screen was only showing the above sentences.

White light shone so brightly that one could become blind by it, and the sound was annoying to the ears, repeating the same sentence in its robotic voice.

Naina grew annoyed by it, "What the hell?? Why is it acting like a 100 years old laptop? It was working just fine now, ugh…and what is it saying system assigning is in process? What system? Is it updating or what?"

"It just has to happen when I'm flooded with ideas here! Wow, what a great timing!" Her tone was full of sarcasm at the last sentence, as if the laptop had heard her sarcasm, its screen turned black again, maybe showing its dissatisfaction.

Watching this her eyes widened, "It seems the world is telling me to buy a new laptop."

But just her words escape her mouth, she heard the robotic voice, 

{{System assigning is completed….bind the system to the host….1…..}}

"What is happening with the laptop?? What is completed and who is bound with the system??" Her confused self watched the screen as the new words started appearing on it.

{{...2….}}

"Wait a minute, is it a countdown? But for what?" 

Who had guessed that her question would be answered so soon after she said it.

{{Countdown for you to bind with the system and …..3…..}}

"For me? What do you mea-

But before she could complete her question, a light shone so bright as if the sun had left the sky and was standing right before her eyes, saying 'look at my shining rays, it's so dazzling that could burn your eyes, no, wait it could burn you whole'.

And before she could understand what was happening she had vanished on the spot, leaving only silence after her, and the laptop that seemed to be plagued returned to its normal condition, flashing the comments.

In the room, there was no one , who knows where Naina had vanished to, hope her eyes, no, no, hope she is not burnt to ash by the sun king dazzling rays.