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The Knight’s vow

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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Feast of Shadows

The great hall of Eldridge Castle breathed like a living thing that night. Its ancient stones, quarried from the storm-scarred cliffs of the northern moors centuries earlier, hummed with the faint, persistent echo of old magic. Torchlight—fed by pitch-soaked brands and enchanted oils that burned without smoke—danced along the high tapestries, where silver-threaded stags pursued wolves whose eyes sometimes seemed to glow when no one was looking directly at them. The flames cast shifting shadows that made the woven beasts appear to move, as though the hunt were still taking place in some eternal, half-remembered moment.

Long oak tables ran the length of the hall, groaning under the weight of the feast. Platters of roasted venison dripped honey glaze that caught the firelight like molten amber. Wheels of sharp blue-veined cheese sat beside baskets of dark plums whose skins held an unnatural sheen, as if the fruit still carried the memory of the enchanted groves from which it had been gathered. Pitchers of mulled wine spiced with starbloom—the rare herb said to sharpen the senses and loosen guarded secrets—circulated among the guests, filling the air with cinnamon, clove, and something faintly metallic, like distant lightning.

In the high gallery, minstrels plucked lutes strung with silver that never tarnished. Their melodies were thin and wistful, carrying an undertone no untrained ear could quite place: the sigh of wind through ancient pines, the low howl of a wolf on the edge of hearing, the crackle of storm just before rain.

Lady Elara Varyn sat at the high table beneath the great banner of House Varyn—a silver vine entwined around a black yew tree on a field of emerald. Her spine was straight as a bowstring, her hands folded demurely in the lap of her emerald silk gown. The bodice was embroidered with silver vines that climbed toward her throat like living tendrils. On quiet nights she sometimes felt them shift against her skin, as though testing the boundaries of the fabric. Tonight they warmed faintly, restless, as if sensing a coming tempest.

She hated the dress.

It had not been chosen for her comfort or taste, but to remind Lord Harlan Drayce—and every watching noble—what fine, magically potent blood he would soon bind to his house through their betrothal. The heavy silk felt like chains disguised as beauty. The weight of expectation pressed against her ribs with every breath.

Elara lifted her goblet, pretending to sip. The starbloom wine tingled on her tongue, sharpening colors and sounds until the hall felt almost too vivid. Across the crowded space, Harlan laughed too loudly at some jest from one of his retainers. His beard was oiled to a glossy sheen; the heavy gold rings on his fingers caught the torchlight like tiny captured suns. He was handsome in the blunt, confident way that broad shoulders and easy authority could make a man seem so. But Elara had long since learned that such confidence often masked cruelty—and his bloodline carried no trace of the old magic. He resented anyone who did.

Their betrothal had been sealed three summers past, when the border skirmishes with the northern clans first threatened to erupt into full war. Peace through marriage, her father had declared in the council chamber, voice heavy with finality. Duty before desire. Whenever Harlan's hand brushed her arm or his gaze lingered too long, the magic in her veins recoiled—cold, rejecting, warning. She had learned to school her face into perfect composure, but the rejection still burned beneath her skin.

She let her gaze drift across the hall, seeking escape in the familiar chaos. Servants wove between knights and ladies like shadows, refilling goblets and clearing plates with practiced silence. A young page boy nearly tripped over one of the great hounds sprawled beneath the tables; the beast's eyes glowed faint amber in the dim light, a remnant of the old bloodline that still ran in some of the castle dogs. At the far end, near the roaring hearth, a knot of lesser nobles argued passionately over the merits of falcons versus hounds for the coming autumn hunt.

Then the massive oak doors at the far end of the hall crashed open.

A gust of cold night air swept in, carrying the sharp scent of rain, pine resin, and the unmistakable metallic tang of storm-magic. Conversation stuttered and died. Heads turned as one.

A man stood framed in the doorway, cloak dripping onto the rushes. Tall and broad-shouldered, his plate armor bore the marks of hard use—dents and deep scratches that no armorer's polish could fully erase. Rain glistened on dark hair plastered to his brow, accentuating sharp cheekbones and a jagged scar that ran from temple to jaw like a lightning strike frozen in flesh. His eyes were winter slate flecked with silver, catching the torchlight like frost under starlight. Around his left gauntlet, a faint, pulsing glow of contained lightning marked him unmistakably.

Sir Thorne Blackwood.

Exile. Oathbreaker. Last of the Stormbound.

The name moved through the hall like a chill wind. Once the king's most trusted knight, bound by blood-oath to wield storm-magic in defense of the realm—until he had turned that power against royal command, or so the official decree claimed. The truth was buried deeper, guarded by oaths and scars no one dared speak aloud.

He stepped forward. His boots left steaming prints on the cold stone. The minstrels faltered; one lute string snapped with a mournful twang.

Lord Varyn rose from his high seat, face darkening beneath his circlet. "Sir Thorne," he said, voice carrying the careful courtesy of a man who would rather reach for his sword. "You were not expected."

Thorne inclined his head—just enough to satisfy protocol, no more. "The roads were unkind, my lord. And the king's summons… urgent."

Murmurs swelled like a rising tide. The king's summons? Even Harlan's easy smile tightened at the edges.

Thorne's gaze swept the hall—methodical, unhurried—until it locked on Elara.

Time stuttered.

The air between them crackled. Torches flared brighter for an instant. The silver vines embroidered on her gown shimmered as though drinking in unseen lightning. Her pulse roared in her ears, louder than the storm outside. His stare stripped away the gown, the jewels, the careful mask she wore for her father's court; it saw the woman who dreamed of riding unbound across the wild moors, hair loose, no betrothal ring burning her finger. It saw the hunger she had buried so deep she sometimes forgot it was there.

She should look away. She did not.

She lifted her chin a fraction—a silent challenge. See me. Truly see me.

A slow, dangerous smile ghosted across his scarred mouth—gone in the space of a heartbeat.

He accepted the seat a servant indicated near the lower tables. The hall exhaled. Conversation resumed in louder, forced bursts, but the undercurrent remained: something had shifted.

Elara's fingers tightened on her goblet until the silver warmed unnaturally against her palm. Harlan leaned close, breath warm against her ear. "An interesting guest," he murmured. "I wonder what storm he brings to our table."

She did not answer. Her eyes had found Thorne again. He drank deeply from his own goblet, gaze never leaving hers. Lightning flashed outside the high arched windows, illuminating the hall in stark white for a single breath. In that instant, she swore she saw faint silver threads of magic arc between them—like a vow spoken without words, binding and forbidden.

The feast continued, but Elara barely tasted the food that followed. Course after course arrived: spiced quail, honeyed pears, almond cakes dusted with sugar that sparkled like fresh snow. She answered questions when spoken to, smiled when expected, but her awareness remained fixed on the man at the lower tables. He ate sparingly, movements deliberate, as though measuring every bite against some inner tally. He spoke little to those around him, yet the space he occupied seemed larger than it should—charged, watchful.

When the minstrels struck up a lively galliard, couples rose to dance in the cleared center of the hall. Harlan extended his hand. "My lady?"

She placed her fingers in his, letting him lead her into the circle. The steps were familiar, practiced, but tonight they felt mechanical. Harlan's grip was firm—possessive. His eyes flicked toward Thorne more than once.

Across the shifting bodies, she caught Thorne watching. Not the dance. Her.

The music swelled. Harlan spun her; when she came back around, Thorne was on his feet, moving toward the side doors as though drawn by the same invisible thread that pulled at her chest.

She excused herself at the earliest possible moment, murmuring something about needing air. Her father nodded absently, already deep in conversation with an envoy from the southern marches. Harlan watched her go, eyes narrowing, but he did not follow—yet.

The corridor beyond the great hall was cooler, shadowed. Stone walls etched with faint glowing runes pulsed in slow rhythm with the distant thunder. She walked slowly, fingers trailing along a tapestry depicting an ancient hunt: riders and hounds pursuing a white stag through endless mist-shrouded forest.

Footsteps echoed behind her—measured, unhurried.

She did not turn at first. But she knew.

"Lady Elara."

His voice was low, rough from the road and perhaps long disuse. It carried the rumble of storm and sent heat racing through her veins.

She stopped. Turned.

Thorne stood at the edge of torchlight, helm tucked under one arm, rain still clinging to his dark hair. Up close, the scar pulled slightly when he spoke; the silver flecks in his eyes burned brighter in the dimness.

"You should not follow a lady from the hall uninvited," she said, voice steadier than the wild beat of her heart.

"I did not follow." He took one step closer—still well beyond arm's reach, but near enough she felt the charge in the air between them. "I needed air. The hall… suffocates."

She studied him. Rain had darkened his cloak to near black; mud clung to his boots. Yet there was no apology in his posture, no deference. Only that same direct gaze.

"The king sent you," she said—not a question.

"Aye." He glanced down the corridor, ensuring they were alone. "With word that cannot wait for dawn. But that is for your father, not you."

"Then why speak to me?"

Thunder rolled outside. The runes on the walls flared softly, bathing them in pale silver.

"Because you looked at me as though the storm inside you answered the one outside."

Her breath caught. No one had ever named it so plainly.

"I am not afraid of storms," she whispered.

"Nor am I." His voice dropped lower. "But I am afraid of what this one might cost us both."

He took one more step.

Now he was close enough that she could smell rain, leather, ozone—raw magic. Her vines shimmered brighter; his gauntlet pulsed in answer, the faint glow tracing veins of lightning along the metal.

Neither reached out.

Yet the space between them felt alive, electric. His hand—gauntleted, scarred—lifted slowly, hovering inches from her cheek as though testing an invisible boundary. She felt the heat of his palm even through the armored leather, felt the faint crackle of contained lightning dancing along his fingers like captured stars.

Her own hand rose instinctively, trembling, stopping just short of his—fingertips a breath apart.

The air between their hands shimmered silver for a heartbeat. Tiny sparks jumped—harmless, searing. Her breath hitched. His jaw tightened.

Neither closed the distance.

They stood frozen in that agonizing near-touch, hearts pounding in rhythm with the storm outside, every inch of space between them screaming with want and restraint. The magic binding them hummed—fated, dangerous, already tested by exile, betrothal, the king's wrath hanging like a blade above their heads.

"If the roads stay open tomorrow," he said, voice barely above a whisper, "I ride at dawn. Toward the moors… where the old oaths still hold."

She met his eyes, voice soft but fierce. "Why tell me?"

"Because you look like a woman who knows what it is to be bound—and what it would feel like to break free."

Lightning cracked outside, silver light outlining them both—two souls caught in the same storm.

Voices echoed from the hall—someone calling for more wine, laughter spiking.

"We should return," she said, but her hand stayed raised, inches from his.

He nodded once. "We should."

Neither moved for another endless second.

Then—slowly, reluctantly—his fingers curled inward. Hers followed. The sparks died. The magic retreated, but left heat lingering on her skin like a brand.

She turned first, walking back toward light and noise.

Thorne watched her go, torchlight catching the scar on his face like prophecy.

Outside, the storm broke fully, rain hammering the castle walls like an army at the gates.