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Chapter 28 - CHAPTER 28 – THE BLACK-HAIRED STRANGER

Spring came early that year.

The snow vanished faster than usual, rivers swelling until they glimmered under the silver light of the city's dome. From the hills above, Nhilly could see the distant skyline of the outer districts steel and glass glowing faintly through the morning mist. Yet here, in the quiet outskirts where the Major Dojo stood, the world felt older.

No traffic hum. No drones passing overhead.

Just wind, pine, and the clean echo of wooden swords meeting.

The dojo thrived that season new students, new laughter, and the growing legend of Lucian Major, Nhilly's father.

Even in an age where most people trained in virtual simulators, his school had become something sacred one of the last that still taught the blade by hand. Returnees and scholars alike spoke of him with respect. His philosophy the sword is not to conquer, but to remain human had made him famous, even beyond their city.

And wherever his name was spoken, another followed:

"The boy will surpass him."

Nhilly didn't understand the weight of that yet. He just loved the attention.

The older students treated him like a prodigy, the younger ones like a hero. Vendors in town smiled when he passed, offering food or charms. Sometimes they even asked for autographs though he could barely spell his name in cursive.

Life, for Nhilly, was perfect.

 

But perfection never lasts.

The first signs came as whispers carried through the newsfeeds encrypted posts about "unregistered Star carriers," about rogue Returnees living off-grid. There were even grainy videos of people bending light or metal in the outer colonies.

Returnees.

Nhilly listened wide-eyed as the older students talked about them late into the night.

"They say one man wiped out a navy fleet by himself," one whispered.

"That's nothing," another said. "My cousin saw a woman walking on air her eyes glowed like suns."

Nhilly leaned in eagerly. "Do you think they were heroes?"

The men exchanged uneasy looks.

"Maybe once," someone muttered. "But when you come back from that place, you don't stay the same."

Nhilly frowned. "What do you mean?"

They didn't answer.

 

A week later, more students arrived people who'd travelled across sectors just to study under his father.

Some wore sleek training gear from advanced academies; others came in worn uniforms, relics from older dojos that had shut down.

Nhilly sparred them all and beat them all.

"You move like your father," one said afterward, breathless. "Almost mechanical."

Nhilly grinned. "That's because I've been training since I could walk."

The man chuckled, though there was a flicker of pity behind his smile. "Then I hope you never have to use it for real, kid."

Nhilly didn't understand what he meant.

That night, the storm began.

Lightning flickered beyond the city's distant towers, turning the glass spires into shifting mirrors of white and blue. Out here, power was patchy the dojo's solar panels hummed faintly, lights dimming as the storm rolled in.

Nhilly couldn't sleep. He slipped out of bed, pulled on his jacket, and padded through the hall.

Rain beat against the roof, dripping through the eaves.

The yard was soaked, the lanterns flickering under the wind.

He stepped outside anyway.

Cold water ran down his face, but he smiled. He loved the sound the chaos, the way the world smelled clean again after thunder.

And then, beneath the storm's growl, he heard footsteps.

Slow. Steady.

He turned toward the gates.

A figure stood there, motionless against the lightning.

At first, he thought it was a soldier the posture was too calm, too composed. But as the next flash struck, he saw her clearly. A girl no older than seventeen. Long black hair clung to her face, her eyes reflecting the storm light with a dull, uncanny glimmer. She wore travel leathers reinforced with fibre mesh, and a sword hung across her back old, scarred, and real.

She didn't knock. She didn't speak.

She just stood there, letting the rain fall through her hair.

Nhilly froze, every childish instinct screaming to run and yet he couldn't.

Lucian Major appeared behind him seconds later, calm and silent. The way his presence filled the air reminded Nhilly why even soldiers bowed to him.

The girl's eyes lifted to meet his.

"Who are you?" Lucian asked, voice level but edged.

She bowed lightly. "A traveller. Seeking a teacher."

Lucian studied her, eyes narrowing. "There are plenty of academies for traveller's."

"None that still teach the old way."

Her words were simple but carried a strange weight like she was reciting something long rehearsed.

Thunder rumbled again. Lightning illuminated her neck for a fraction of a second, and Nhilly saw it a faint sigil glowing on her neck.

A Star.

Lucian's voice softened, but only slightly. "You've been there, then."

"I came back," she said.

The words shouldn't have sounded so heavy, but they did.

He nodded slowly. "Then you've seen what few have. You may stay here for now."

Nhilly's heart leapt with excitement. "Father! She can train with us?"

Lucian turned sharply. "Inside, Nhilly."

"But—"

"Now."

The tone left no room for argument.

Nhilly hesitated before obeying, glancing over his shoulder one last time. Through the flicker of lightning, he saw them his father and the girl standing opposite each other, two silhouettes cast in white and shadow.

For a moment, neither moved. Then the girl bowed again, and Lucian returned it.

The thunder rolled overhead.

Nhilly didn't understand why, but as he closed the paper door, he felt a shiver trace his spine the kind that whispered the world had just shifted.

And outside, in the yard, the storm kept falling.

Morning came with stillness.

The storm had broken sometime before dawn, leaving the air damp and heavy with the scent of rain-soaked pine. Mist drifted over the courtyard, curling between the polished wooden posts like ghosts reluctant to leave.

Nhilly rose early earlier than usual. He hadn't slept much. The image of the girl at the gates wouldn't leave his mind.

He dressed quickly, tied his belt in a messy knot, and slipped outside, his wooden sword slung loosely at his side.

The dojo was alive again. Students were already training, their voices rising and falling in the rhythm of their drills. But at the far end of the yard, someone new moved among them graceful, silent, and devastatingly precise.

The black-haired girl.

Her sword flashed like lightning. Every swing was exact, every motion deliberate. When she moved, the air itself seemed to part for her.

The students around her had stopped pretending to spar they were watching, half in awe, half in fear.

Nhilly froze by the doorway, eyes wide.

She wasn't just strong. She was different.

He could tell by how she didn't hesitate. Every cut, every parry carried weight not the controlled rhythm of training, but the instinct of someone who had fought to live.

It was as if she knew the shape of death and danced around it.

Lucian stood nearby, arms folded. He said nothing, only observed her with the same quiet intensity that Nhilly had inherited.

The girl finished her routine with a single downward slash that split the training post cleanly in half. The two halves hit the ground with a dull thud, smoke rising faintly where the blade had struck.

No one spoke.

Lucian broke the silence. "Enough. That's sufficient for today."

The girl sheathed her sword and bowed deeply. "Thank you."

Lucian's tone remained calm, though the air around him felt heavier. "You move like someone who's forgotten what rest feels like."

She didn't meet his gaze. "Rest makes you slow."

Lucian studied her for a long moment, then nodded once. "Perhaps."

Nhilly stepped forward before he could stop himself. "That was amazing!"

Every head turned.

The girl's eyes flicked toward him, curious but cool. "You're the boy from last night."

"Nhilly," he said quickly, grinning. "I train here! You were incredible. I've never seen anyone cut a post like that."

Her expression didn't change. "It's just practice."

"Not like that!" Nhilly said. "You could take on anyone here!"

Lucian shot him a look. "Nhilly."

He froze. "…Yes, Father?"

Lucian's voice stayed level, but the weight behind it was unmistakable. "Show respect. She's not your friend."

Nhilly frowned. "But I—"

"Not your opponent," Lucian repeated.

Nhilly looked down, muttering, "Right…"

The girl glanced between them, something unreadable flickering in her eyes. "You've raised him well," she said softly.

Lucian's reply was quiet. "He raises himself faster than I can guide him."

A faint smile ghosted across her lips. "That sounds dangerous."

Lucian exhaled through his nose. "It is."

He turned toward Nhilly. "Come. You're with me today. We'll train inside."

Nhilly hesitated. "I wanted to spar—"

"You'll have time," Lucian interrupted. "Just not with her."

There was something final in his tone, something that made even Nhilly back down.

The girl bowed again, then turned to leave. For a brief moment, her eyes met Nhilly's calm, detached, and endlessly distant.

Then she was gone, her footsteps vanishing into the mist.

The following days were strange.

The dojo felt the same, yet different. The laughter still filled the halls, but quieter now, as though everyone sensed something unspoken in the air.

The girl her name was never given trained apart from the others. She spent hours alone in the yard, running through the same sets until her hands bled. She spoke little, ate less, and slept even less than that.

Nhilly watched her every chance he got.

Something about her unsettled him. Not fear fascination.

She was what he wanted to be: unshakable.

John noticed.

"She's not someone you can copy, kid," he said one evening, sitting on the veranda with a drink in hand.

Nhilly looked up from where he was polishing his wooden sword. "Why not?"

"Because people like her don't train to live. They train because they already died once."

Nhilly frowned. "That's stupid."

John gave a soft laugh. "It is. But that's what happens when you survive something that breaks you."

"I won't break," Nhilly said confidently.

John smiled, a little sad. "You don't get to choose that."

Two days later, Nhilly's chance came.

The girl had just finished sparring with John or rather, dismantling him.

She moved like a storm made human, her blade intercepting every strike before John could even commit to them.

When it was over, John dropped to one knee, panting.

Nhilly stepped forward. "Wait!"

The girl looked up, raising an eyebrow. "What is it?"

"I want to spar with you."

Lucian's voice came instantly from behind. "No."

Nhilly turned. "Father—"

"I said no."

"She's around my age! I just want to see how strong—"

"She's not your age," Lucian said sharply, eyes narrowing. "Not anymore."

Nhilly blinked, confused. "What does that even mean?"

Lucian didn't answer. He just sighed. "Go inside."

But Nhilly stayed rooted to the spot. "If I can't fight her, how will I ever improve?"

John put a hand on his shoulder. "Kid, let it go."

Nhilly shook it off. "No! I have to try."

The girl studied him for a long moment. Her expression didn't shift, but something in her eyes softened maybe curiosity, maybe pity.

"If your father allows it," she said, "I'll spar you."

Lucian's jaw tightened.

Nhilly turned to him, pleading. "Please."

For a long moment, Lucian said nothing. Then, with visible reluctance, he nodded once. "Fine. One match. No arrogance."

Nhilly grinned. "You won't regret it."

Lucian muttered, "I already do."

They faced each other in the courtyard.

The rain had stopped, but the air still smelled of thunder.

Nhilly bowed deeply, his wooden sword steady in his hands. The girl mirrored him calm, distant, unreadable.

When Lucian gave the signal, they moved.

Nhilly struck first quick, confident, his footwork sharp. The girl parried easily.

He advanced again, faster, chaining swings and feints, forcing her back a step. For a heartbeat, pride surged through him.

Then her eyes shifted.

In an instant, everything changed.

Her movements weren't faster they were inevitable.

Every swing of his blade was redirected, every stance punished. She read his rhythm like she'd memorized it before he was born.

Nhilly stumbled. Her next strike swept past his guard and tapped his ribs, sharp enough to hurt but not wound.

He gasped, eyes wide.

Lucian called out, "Enough!"

Nhilly shook his head. "No! Again!"

He charged. She met him halfway.

The clash was brief one blur of motion, one flash of light.

Nhilly's sword flew from his hand and landed meters away. The next thing he knew, he was flat on his back, the girl's blade hovering just above his throat.

Rain began to fall again, soft and steady.

Nhilly lay there, chest heaving, eyes wide with shock.

The girl lowered her sword and stepped back.

Nhilly sat up slowly, voice trembling. "You're… you're…. broken."

Her expression softened just barely.

She turned and walked away, leaving him alone in the rain.

Lucian approached, his shadow falling over Nhilly. "Do you understand now?"

Nhilly didn't answer. He just stared at the ground, fists trembling.

Lucian sighed. "There are things you can't learn from winning."

Nhilly whispered, "She's not human."

"No," Lucian said softly. "She's what happens when you forget how to be."

That night, Nhilly lay awake listening to the rain.

For the first time in his life, victory felt meaningless.

And somewhere deep inside though he didn't understand it yet something cracked.

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