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Chapter 5 - "Initial Sparks"

Segment 1 — Debate Practice Begins

The debate room smelled faintly of polished wood and ink. Students shuffled their papers, adjusted their chairs, and whispered nervously to one another. Avery stood at the back, backpack slung over one shoulder, notebook clutched casually.

She had joined the Southlake Debate Circle officially now. Official. The word felt strange but thrilling on her tongue. She had watched, observed, planned. And now it was her turn.

The coach called out, "Pair up and present a short argument on today's topic."

Avery paired with Lani, her quiet, sweet batchmate. Lani was fidgeting slightly, pencil tapping nervously against her notebook. Avery gave her a small, reassuring smile.

"Don't worry," Avery said softly. "Just follow my lead. Structure it logically. We'll be fine."

Lani blinked, impressed by Avery's calmness. "Right. Okay."

As they began, Avery's mind ran like a silent machine—every counterargument anticipated, every rebuttal mapped out, every word measured. She spoke steadily, clearly, her voice carrying enough to command attention without seeming overbearing.

Her teammates were nervous, stumbling over sentences, but Avery kept them grounded, adjusting phrasing, clarifying points. She didn't dominate the discussion—she guided it. Balanced. Analytical. Precise.

By the time their turn ended, a few heads turned, nodding in quiet approval. Avery returned to her seat, expression neutral, notebook open, already analyzing what she could do better next round.

Segment 2 — Darin Notices (POV: Darin)

Darin leaned against the wall, arms crossed, watching the session quietly. His eyes tracked Avery as she guided her pair, calm and confident despite the nerves around her.

Interesting, he thought. She doesn't just talk. She listens. She adjusts. She anticipates. And she doesn't show off, not like most beginners.

He noticed the way her gaze scanned the room, how she measured each response from her classmates, how she corrected subtly without drawing attention to herself.

She's sharp. Analytical. The kind of talent you can't teach—you can only refine.

A spark of admiration flickered. He wanted to push her, challenge her, see how far she could go. Yet there was something cautious, almost protective, about how he observed.

Mentor mode on, he reminded himself. She's not ready for spotlight yet, but she has potential.

Darin's eyes softened slightly as she ended her turn. Her calm composure was rare in someone so young. He made a mental note: "Watch her. Push her. Guide her. And don't let anyone intimidate her, including herself."

Segment 3 — Friends Cheer Subtly

Avery returned to her spot next to Lani, and her old Social Science circle hovered nearby. Michelle clapped lightly, whispering, "See? Told you she'd ace it."

Anari grinned. "She's… somehow calm while making everyone else look like amateurs."

Paul, of course, was the most vocal—but quiet enough to remain playful. "Okay, Avery. Don't make the rest of us look bad. I can only handle so much embarrassment from your brilliance." He winked, notebook raised as if to record her genius in real-time.

Avery merely nodded, a faint smile tugging at her lips. She appreciated the support, the gentle encouragement, the safe space her friends created. She didn't need applause or flattery—just the subtle reassurance that she belonged here.

Kai shuffled beside her, whispering, "You're… really good at this."

Avery gave a small shrug. "I just… focus. Observe. Then act."

Her friends exchanged knowing looks. That was Avery—calm, composed, quietly brilliant, slightly mysterious, and utterly untouchable by nervousness or fear.

Segment 4 — Self-Reflection and Goal-Focus

Later, after practice ended, Avery sat under the familiar tree in the courtyard, notebook open, reviewing the session mentally. Her mind ran through every argument she had made, every subtle counter she had anticipated, every point she could refine.

Next time, she thought, start with the main premise first. Keep the examples tighter. Push the flow faster.

Her gaze wandered to her friends chatting nearby. They laughed and teased each other, the kind of comfortable chaos she had always loved. Yet Avery felt a gentle tug inside: she wanted to enjoy it, but not lose focus. Not this time.

She flipped open her notebook again, jotting down notes: strategies, improvements, observational points about classmates' habits. She felt a spark of satisfaction. Growth. Progress. This was why she had returned.

Romance didn't cross her mind—not even once. She noted Darin's quiet admiration, but only analytically. He's observing me. Mentoring me. Calculating potential. That's interesting. Nothing more.

Even Paul's playful teasing, while enjoyable, didn't spark any flutter. Avery's world was centered on skill, self-improvement, and second chances. She had a plan, and she intended to stick to it.

As the sun dipped lower, casting warm tones over the campus, Avery closed her notebook. She felt… capable. Ready. Determined.

And as Darin watched from a distance, a small smile tugged at his lips. She was remarkable—not in a flashy way, but in a quiet, intelligent, confident way that drew attention naturally. A talent like hers didn't come around often.

I'll need to keep a close eye on her, he thought. Mentor her carefully. Guide her growth. And maybe… just maybe… she'll surprise even herself.

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