Please help me with POWER STONE!!!

Reviews, please! Even if it's blank, it will help me get a contract for this work!!! We have many [+18] Chapters to release.

I will do my best to make this a great work. If you notice anything missing or think of any additional elements that could enhance the flavor, please let me know. I enjoy revisiting past chapters.

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A story about college life, forbidden power, an underground dungeon... and a whole lot of pleasure.

Dorian Amore was just a hardworking, book-smart guy trying to prepare for university and settle into the old house he inherited from his father. Socially awkward, painfully single, and a self-declared virgin, he had spent his life focused on studying—not relationships.

But everything changes when he discovers a strange bookshelf in the basement—lined with ancient books, each bearing titles that sound more fantasy than reality. The one that catches his attention simply reads: Incubus.

The moment he opens it, he’s flooded with red smoke that invades his body, altering him from the inside out. Horns, wings, a tail, perfect vision, a chiseled physique—and an unrelenting, primal hunger for something he’s never experienced before: pleasure.

To make things worse—or weirder—a seductive voice awakens in his mind: Yamir Cupid, a former incubus now calling himself his alter ego, fused with him, serving as both mentor and sarcastic mental roommate.

Yamir lays it out clearly: Dorian has become a fledgling incubus. To survive, he must feed—not on food, but on desire. If he doesn’t, he’ll fall into a starvation state… and Yamir will take control.

As Dorian tries to adapt to his new identity while starting university life, he also uncovers something strange beneath the basement of his new home—an underground dungeon, sealed and forgotten.

The deeper he explores it, the more it seems like a gateway to another world. One possibly connected to the powers now inside him.

Back in the mysterious basement, that mysterious bookshelf holds more than just the Incubus tome. Volumes titled Succubus, Divine-Blooded, Feybound, and Dragonkin—each one a potential path to transformation, and maybe, power for those he chooses.

Now Dorian faces a decision that could change more than just his future:
Should he find a way to be a normal human… or share this twisted new power with others?

I stopped writing due to problems with this work; I will reupload it soon with new chapters, 5 hopefully by the end of the week. Thanks for reading; please look forward to changes and improved writing, thanks!


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