Got it π β Chloro, not Klo. I'll correct the passage while keeping the improved flow.
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The yard was quiet.
Jelo had been waiting there for a while, the evening air warm against his skin. Just when he was starting to wonder if Chloro had changed his mind, a figure finally walked into the training yard.
Chloro.
He stopped a few steps away from Jelo and studied him silently, his sharp eyes observing every detail.
Then he spoke.
"First, we start with the basics."
Jelo straightened slightly, listening carefully.
"Your control training," Chloro continued. "If you want to master fire, the first thing you must learn is temperature control."
He lifted his hand slightly, and a small flame flickered above his palm.
"You must learn to control your heat precisely. Not just creating fire, but deciding how hot it becomes and how much power you put into it."
The flame above his hand shrank, becoming thinner and sharper.
