Hey everyone,
I've been thinking about this for a long time.
When I first started The Elementals, I had a fire in my chest — a vision of a world built on power, survival, and the unbreakable will to rise above fate. You saw glimpses of that in the first twenty chapters, and many of you still supported me despite the flaws, the pacing, and the things I was still learning.
For that, I owe you more than words can say.
But as I reread my work, I realized something important — The Elementals wasn't yet the story it was meant to be. The foundation was there, but the emotion, the depth, and the world's heartbeat were still caged. And if I truly want to make this story everything it can be… I have to start again.
I'm not abandoning The Elementals. I'm refining it.
I'm giving it the weight, emotion, and atmosphere it deserves.
Think of this rewrite as my second awakening — just like Jayden's.
I want every battle to feel real, every loss to cut deep, every triumph to feel earned. I want a world that breathes, evolves, and swallows you whole — the kind of story that makes you feel what the characters feel.
Some people have compared The Elementals to Shadow Slave, and honestly? That means a lot.
Not because I want to copy it — but because I share the same spirit that made Shadow Slave great.
That grit.
That hunger.
That slow-burn rise from nothing to something legendary.
Like Sunny, Jayden isn't chosen by fate — he chooses himself.
He isn't blessed by destiny — he fights for every breath, every spark of power, every glimpse of hope.
That's the kind of story I want to give you. Not another cliché tale, but one that earns its greatness page by page.
So yes, I'm rewriting The Elementals.
Not because I failed — but because I'm finally ready to succeed.
To everyone who's read, commented, voted, or even silently followed — thank you. You gave me courage. You reminded me why I write.
This isn't the end.
It's the rebirth of something that could one day stand among the best.
Stay with me.
Let's rebuild this world — brighter, fiercer, and unforgettable.
With all my heart,
Guilty4
