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DRAVIEL’S SAGA:- BEGINNING OF LK

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Draviel – The Pathway of 555 Draviel was born heir to nothing — the last son of a forgotten line, wandering a continent broken by war and ruled by false gods of gold, ash, and fire. At twenty, he awakens the Books of Truth — fragments of creation itself: Beginnings, Time, Soul, and Crown. To touch them is burden; to unite them is to decide the fate of the world. But Draviel’s journey, the Pathway of 555, is not conquest. It is covenant. Every scar becomes vow. Every hymn reshapes the air — hidden from the false, but heard by the oppressed. His companions walk sealed and scarred beside him, each trial burning mercy into fire. Yet shadows stalk them. The Crowned Man waits, planting betrayal, hungering to seize the Books and remake himself as god. Draviel knows the Pathway ends in sacrifice — his flesh, his voice, his place among them. But until that day, he walks unbroken, singing the prayer that even death cannot silence: > “I love the Father Yahweh, the Son Yeshua, and the Holy Spirit.” The Pathway is not his alone. It is for all who fall, all who repent — until the circle closes.
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Chapter 1 - DRAVIEL’S SAGA:- BEGINNING OF LK part 1

Chapter 1- The Prayer

Then priest stops him "Child's life or revenge." Elyon stops himself and "Any answer for my child condition" he asked. "God answers to family's prayers. Many will believe God doesn't answer but was their belief. Be honest with your prayers" priest said. "What if it doesn't work" Elyon asked in sorrow. 'Even rose comes with thorn. Everything has it purpose" priest said.

Elyon and Mira went up into the hills that no one comes and started to prayer. Mira ends with the prayer "I love the father Yahweh, the son Yeshua and the Holy spirit. amen". The child's arm rise up and brushes Mira cheeks. Suddenly time stop between them and the world it was dark but there formed a fire in front of Mira, Draviel and Elyon. Unknown said to them "when his age is 3 started teaching about the world and magic." Before they want to question him they returned to the world. But the fire was there and draviel's left side of his temple had a silver hairs and a lightening had struck.

Mira asked Elyon "Doesn't it too much for him to handle." Elyon replied "who are to question God's man". Mira "how did you know he was god's man. We have seen others who can bend time their will." Elyon replied "Yes but we also notice that in time bending skill effect will only remain in that domain but look here the fire is same as in time bending domain. Because it doesn't hurt grass while other spreads." Mira agreed "Now well back the beginning I guess, what about you?". Elyon "same as you".

Elyon and Mira gather up their knowledge in hidden words and incomplete divine combat arts in an organized scroll in order for draviel and other kids member of their society.

NOTE:-

ORDER OF 13 :- a society who choose live in the quote "I am a sinner. God have mercy on me and lend me your strength to fight against evils" in the mind and faith. The group leads others to God. But as soon as other get what they need the leave. Hellfire was the first society formed before Jesus. After Jesus formed the church. Church lost its value, its begun to fall in the pit of endless evils. Remaining faithful person including pope issue an order. That's how order of 13 starts. Even some pope, bishops, and priests fall into the evils order of 13 fight against it. Mainly used martial art is divine combat. But its called incomplete is because of human emotions. And many great warrior are lost because of it. But they move on cried only in funerals and said only God knows how pain they felt in their lifetime. Including hellfire and others come learn divine combat. Even the order 13 knows their final moves they teach it to them. So in fact order of 13 knew they have low numbers never tasted defeat.

Chapter 2- The Adventurer's Boy

3 months after 3 years. Draviel training starts as well as others child. Elyon and his friends teaches basic body mobility and divine combat . Mira and her friends teaches grammars of languages and symbols of ruins, How to makes and read runes, basics of magics. Elyon training early morning light exercise then Mira teaching after that real training of Elyon start.

Draviel keep up to the training and help other kids too. At the age of 12 draviel wisdom surpasses his own parents but his body fails to keep up. He asked his father "why I keep failing in body." Elyon said "You lack the rhythm and flow master that your own path open up." "How do I know the rhythm" draviel asks. Elyon says "Actually no one knows. If that is answer you were looking for you are wrong. Flow and rhythm are joined by mind and heart. You are deafening your ear from it don't let your wisdom blocks you. What is the first law we teach to you." Draviel answered "fear of the lord." Elyon said "why is we fear the lord?." Draviel answered "to keep ourselves humility and humble not as a weak person". Elyon said "now you the answer but applying it in real life is hard." Draviel said "thanks dad."

After 4 months one day draviel and his friend were going other place where the last of training begins. They saw soldiers attacking their own peoples. Draviel and his friends help the victims. Two soldiers seen that and plans to catch victim alongside draviel and his friends. Draviel using his magic said "True God does turn his face from oppressed." Captain of the soldier comes and said "you learned something that are restricted for your age category." "Ever heard of order of 13 you idiot" draviel replied.Captain "have ever seen that weak organization freeing a puny little village or a person. They are just a talk and don't do anything." "Then why do others learn from it and didn't have power to defeat it" draviel replied.

Captain was furious then a voice from behind "go ahead and do it. After all he is Elyon son." Captain look behind all of his soldier were killed brutally. Captain was petrified and said you guys are gods people yet you guys killed them. Draviel "who gods people can't attack wicked peoples like you." Then draviel cut off his head and sent token to kings palace with a note from now on this region under order of 13 control.

Abg one of Elyon friends said "look like you son is born leader like you." "Every leader must carry his own burden. Look like my son life wont be easy as me." Draviel and his friends reached the place for finishing their training.

Chapter 3 – The Hidden tongue

Elandros the name of planet of all mortal beings, there are some creatures that live a life of immortals. Elandros is full of cultures and rituals. At the beginning there was one culture and ritual. After True God and his angels disappeared. wicked ones start coming endless. Each one gone to their like groups except gods 0,3,6,9 its say that they stay in middle of elandros by their followers. In elandros 25% and human occupied,75% are where mythological creature stay.

In 1875 Nov 14 I completed my training. Order of 13 has teleportation marking in 25% in human areas,75% are for grandmaster levels. Today I'm curious where will I go north, south, east, west. I'm Draviel ready to service the one who need our lord my motto "one man, one religion, one god."

A.B.G say "your family prayer draviel."

Draviel "I love father Yahweh the son Yeshua the holy spirit,amen."

In the field of khared-tem where oppressed people was treated as scum, beating them treated as holy redemption.

Draviel appeared, looks at his surrounding many thousands of oppressed people getting beaten by nobles and wicked. When he gazed at the center order of 13,4 member was hanged upside down. Something carved in their body first one body "I'm a sinner", second one "lord have mercy on me", third one "lord give your strength", fourth one "through you I can destroy them". Draviel was furious but calm himself, looking for someone from other organization was here.

Suddenly a man appear from behind. As soon he think he caught draviel it was himself who was caught in illusion. Draviel used mind reading spells on the man. He was from hellfire there are few more hiding in the ruined chapel.

Draviel used 2 minute exploding spells into the man brain. The man brain exploded, draviel sneak into the chapel, there was teleportation spell on the chapel.

Draviel was in ruined chapel similar to order of 13. Draviel was in alert move ahead, holding nothing,he heard something similar to heartbeat of his own. It was from bible stand in front the leaders of order of 13 portrait. Yet something feels lighter draviel put his hand on it, suddenly a shadowy figure appears. "Something made itself uglier,scarier than most can imagine" draviel thought, it says "I'm you draviel let go of everything. I'm not ugly or scarier" it transformed into draviel at his 55. "See only difference is I wear god crown you not." Draviel "well I don't need crown to prove myself, as long as im true to myself and my God that great enough for me." Shadowy figure "are you sure." "In my lord name I rebuke you" draviel shouted.

When he woke up, he was chained, upside down like other members. The one you killed was our member, each of us fell into the same trick as you. Draviel so "you guys heard the heartbeat too." What heartbeat I was talking about illumaniti guys using our members as hellfire guy thing." One of the member of illumaniti comes up and says " what shall I write in your body ugly boy." ''Your sweet name, you who born from dog vomit" draviel replied and broke the chain. My name is ... before he say his name draviel destroy his hands and legs. Someone who was chained upside down says "wish we could help you but can't." Draviel knew about it and said "no insect can harm man unless he let them."

Draviel was surrounded 49 illumaniti members and nobles who fought for themselves. Draviel started to whistle loudly, I rebuke you using my lord power start to echo like thunder from everywhere. Draviel to 49 members of illumaniti "insects doesn't mess with man who knows every plan of their moves,welcome to the real world." 49 member were chained upside down with their limbs cut off. "Feel the pain or are enjoying the pain." Draviel to 4 members take rest I will handle the rest. Draviel to nobles "you guys ready." Draviel to the oppressed people "I can kill them like the guys but these guys not only lack strength, the needed guys with powers to lean into. I killed their supporter and trust me these noble guys choose wicked everytime when they have power, reason of it" draviel upheld the ELDARA book of beginning and end shine white light. "Now say what you guys choose" draviel asked. "Kill them with your sword, let god judge them" an masked lady said.

Crowd also applaud that. Draviel I will, he killed nobles. Later few days draviel to his members, "these are the scrolls u guys need and let your family be here don't go anywhere. Afterall we are brothers." One of 13 ask "what about others?" draviel said "I destroy their teleportation seals." Draviel help the people in day time and evening sing his first song of pathway of 555. Only few people's and members of 13 understand it. After 1.5 month draviel leaves kharad-tem.

Chapter 4 – The Woman by the River

Draviel saw the masked lady, her face was revealed. Struggling with her parchments that wants fly with the wind flow. Draviel caught them and he says "didn't they teach you magic spells that helps you with your parchments." Masked lady, "who are they , you refers to?" draviel "hellfire, ma'am Serenya ." Serenya " well I got the offers and I rejected them." Draviel " then let me erase their mark from you, only if you allow me to." Serenya "you are bluff, you pervert." Draviel spells and put forefinger in the center of her forehead, and ™ was flow out of her. Serenya "I didn't know it." Draviel "how foolish you are. Treating a organization society as newspaper boys." Serenya " won't they come for me, if you broke their mark." Draviel "of course they will unless you show me your skills that an organization itself come for you." Serenya starts writing, her pen and paper glows. "see whenever I write on paper or anything that can scribe in it my words become reality for 30 min. But I can't write for long." Draviel " I see, wanna join me. I can be your protector and you write a scroll for me." Serenya " I will join you, any dirty ideas I can kill you for real." Draviel " well you will see that after all its almost night time."

They camp on river side. Both fried their on fish caught by them. Serenya asked "well why didn't your members helped you during fight with 49 illumaniti members." Draviel "they used spells our motto against my brothers and illumaniti guys used divine protection into unholy torture to my members, if not their training normal person would have died in seconds." Serenya " how can they turn divine into unholy?" draviel " cause they are using almost light spells." Serenya "didn't because of you guys teach them." Draviel " at the end of our story you will get it, lady serenya." Serenya "so draviel tell me your intention from me, nothing is free in this world." Draviel "my intention is write our ways so that sinners get know our lord and everything is free it is us who demends the cost for everything, even want money for our own funeral." Serenya "even your lord demand to be good." Draviel " he demand nothing at all, its us we deviate from our plans forget everything of us." Serenya " he says forget everything come to him." Draviel " he said about material things of this world." "Just because you born in noble and has power yep you can say that and keep that ideal for you and your inconvices" serenya furious said. Draviel answered "well door is open, either come inside or go outside. your choice." "Don't treat my question as never mattered" Serenya said. "well who was reason for it, well I can write and defend myself while certain someone who is my refugee can't defend themselves. And scold god for their death, well looks like I should teleport myself for next destination" said draviel. "You scumbag" after saying that serenya gone to sleep, thinking how to reply his reply. " first version was nice yet you made me look like a scumbag baka author." draviel says by looking up. "Who are talking to or you gone mad" serenya. "To the author of our story" draviel replied.

Chapter 5 – Trial of Ashes

"Hey serenya want me to boost your skill or went to sleep" Draviel asked. Serenya "you can't boost someone's skill" answered in curiosity. Draviel move towards to her and said " I can't boost your words that contain living things or gods but non living things can." Draviel put her that skills by align it to her flow by magic spell. Serenya start feel it and that knockout her.

Serenya in the dark place, suddenly a light figure appear. It said "I know my ending all you need is to follow my scroll". Serenya try to speak then she saw her like a 3rd person. That serenya says "even if you fall, I will keep your scroll safe." Then vivid image of crown man. Zoom in zoom out it repeated with a chant that's says "I will be your word".

Serenya wakes up, the sun was rising up. She looked for draviel and there he was. Sleeping on his magic bed while and food left over was eating by dogs. While serenya slept on mud. She tested her power by throwing a hammer of 1 ton in moving sound speed. Draviel body reacted it own by using his spell and says "you think I can't decrease you powers to". Serenya slaps him "I know that" she was shocked in mind. "You are not strong as I thought you were. Now get ready we are moving". She slapped him again " you pervert, when can get ready without anything because you ruined everything I had". Draviel wakes up saying "what!". He looks around see his food was around her dress she carried lucky her parchment was safe. "Well I have spell that can change your clothes, oh wait clothes is nonliving thing you.". when he looks at her. She changed her clothes and brushing her teeth. "Don't you bath" draviel asked.

They arrived a valley for supplies but it was almost destroyed by raiders. Trees, plants, and rivers life form was like their life form was taken up by spells, wells too, houses were burned too. Scout from raider hold serenya hand and says "leave your boyfriend come with me." Serenya "sure". In her mind she thought and the hammer that blows him out. It was like she thought a hammer appear and blows him up. Draviel "look's you don't hold back, and we caught some audience". Serenya was in the shock of hammer and her mind was blank. "Ah that's why we were restricted boost others" draviel said he knockout her and taken refugee in remaining people and investigated about the raiders.

When serenya wake up "what was that I didn't write anything paper or anything". Draviel said "you forgot first thing you write is in your mind, and you are a beginner". Serenya "well you take care of others right". Draviel said "they don't belong to any organization, perfect for your training. Take rest for now, they don't kill until day after tomorrow."

Raiders came with bomb that make others seen as natural cause. But there was a huge wall blocked their way, it was too high that it covered the entire mountain. "Who build this wall or are we at wrong place check the maps" raiders leader said but as he finish his head was blown off by serenya. There was 150 raider now 148, valley people were 300 before raiders. After raiders raids 100 people left. Serenya deals with raider while draviel saves people taken by raiders.

Serenya was at her limit only 30 left of raiders, her vision starting blurs raiders charged to kill her. Draviel in divine sword art stance he start to kill remaining raider. He held serenya "other than your durability you have done well". Hostages are safely home.

At the evening serenya woke up and says "why didn't boost my durability". "Some things are earned" said draviel. "Well now your back start building new home for these people, for increase your durability." An old man said "I have seen your sword art when I was child". "Well I read old books of martial art god's grace I found this too" draviel answered. Serenya touch the soil to build these people's new home. Suddenly someone active teleportation seals in front of draviel, serenya and the old man.