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Chapter 24 - The Third Evaluation

The day opened like any other in Ashrock — shutters creaked up, chai steam rose from roadside stalls, and rickshaws whined past the store. Khan General Store breathed with the street. Inside, Ashburn's ledger lay open like an old friend; his pen moved quick and careful across columns.

"Rizwan, check the rice batch code again. The Sukkur lot came in different packaging this week."

Rizwan shuffled boxes. "Yes, sir. I'll mark it."

Babar, tallying detergent cartons, barked a laugh. "You still fuss over every packet. Maybe you should marry the inventory and be done."

Ashburn didn't smile much. "Someone has to care," he said. "If we don't, who will?"

The shop hummed around him — small talk here, a woman bargaining there. Still, a quiet felt different today. The system had been silent for days. He almost forgot the soft pulses were part of his life now.

Then it came.

> [System Evaluation – Cycle 3 Complete]

Duration: 3 months

Total Capital Invested: ₹700,000

Net Yield: ₹65,000

Result: Good — Efficient resource growth and stable local impact.

Profit Share Adjustment: +1% → 16%

System Note: "Consistency is progress measured in patience."

Ashburn let the words hang for a breath. Numbers were numbers — blunt and clean — but the system's praise felt like a light through a narrow window.

He did the sum in his head, the way he always did.

Six-and-a half-thousand? No. Sixty-five thousand, his total cycle profit. His share now, sixteen percent of that, would be ten thousand four hundred rupees.

He opened the metal savings box where he kept personal money. The notes there — small bundles he'd stacked over months — totalled about nine thousand six hundred rupees before this. The new share brought his personal savings to roughly twenty thousand. That figure had a way of sounding different when you looked at it on paper: not rich, but enough for a plan.

Babar peered over as Ashburn added the numbers. "That's actual profit, huh? You keep that boxed up like it's secret gold."

Ashburn shrugged. "It's not for buying toys. Reinvest. Keep the van running. Cover wages. Maybe one new shelving unit."

Rizwan chimed in, earnest. "Sir, the van's been getting more orders. Should we hire one extra person for packing?"

Ashburn considered it. His eyes flicked to the list of costs in his ledger — supplier payments, wages, van fuel. Stability sat in the margins, not in flashy bets.

"Hire part-time. Test it for a month," he decided. "If orders hold, we'll bring someone full time."

His mind drew the plan as he spoke. Small steps. Minimal risk. The system's silence after the glow felt like permission.

Outside the shop, the market's noise rose and fell. But in the square across the street something else was stirring: Kainat's charity kitchen, the small community effort that had been bruised by rumor and rivalry not long ago, was trying again.

Ashburn hung up the price board and walked across. The charity's banner — hand-painted, slightly frayed — read: Community Kitchen — Free Meals for All. A handful of people sat on plastic stools, cautious faces that had come back in ones and twos.

Kainat stood stirring a large pot, her sleeves rolled, the fire's glow catching the tired edges of her smile. She spotted him and handed over a small paper cup of soup.

"You came early," she said.

"You start before the day brightens," he said, taking it gratefully. "A good move."

She watched the few customers with quiet attention. "They still look at me like I did something wrong," she said. "Some ask, some avoid. The rival's shadow lasts longer than I imagined."

Ashburn looked at the faces — a woman clutching a child's hand, an older man with a newspaper folded under his arm. "Rumors stick because they're easier to repeat than work is. You just have to keep doing the work."

She laughed softly. "You sound like a fortune teller. When will your next prophecy tell me success comes?"

He shrugged. "When enough people taste your food and remember only that they were fed."

One of the men swallowed his soup, stood up and said quietly, "This is good, sister. Thank you." He left a small coin in the jar anyway, not because he had to, but because the food had been honest.

That sort of little honesty mattered to both of them. For Kainat, the charity was not a business; it was a place for people who needed a meal without asking for it. For Ashburn, the return of trust in the neighborhood meant the market itself was healing.

They worked side by side for an hour, handing plates, clearing bowls, sharing quiet jokes. The rivalry's echo — the Philanthropist's smear campaign — had not evaporated entirely. Yet his fall had left a vacuum people were wary to fill. Kainat's charity could shift the narrative back toward care.

Back at the store, Ashburn checked invoices. The sixty-five thousand yield had already been partly rotated into inventory; his capital was still listed at seven lakh in his ledger — goods sitting as value on shelves and in the van. The system had marked his cycle as good; the new cycle would start with eight lakh, but for now he had to close his books for the quarter.

> [System Update – Next Cycle Ready]

Cycle 4: Duration — 4 months

Starting Capital: ₹800,000

Objective: Expand, Stabilize, Sustain.

Ashburn felt that new number like fresh air. Eight lakh. More options. More responsibility. Risk Mapping — the skill the system had granted after the kitchen's victory — hummed at the edge of his thought when he considered choices. Little colored percentages would slip into view now when he imagined decisions. He trusted it. It had already nudged him away from a bad supplier last month.

He made some notes: recruit one more part-time packer; rotate rice more quickly; test evening delivery routes to an outlying lane where the new small shops had been asking for supply. Each line had a small mental fraction attached: risk here, cost there. He balanced them like plates on a wooden rack.

That evening he locked the shop and walked back over to the kitchen. The light was warmer now, the crowd a little fuller. A woman with a toddler nodded at Kainat, eyes wet with gratitude. A volunteer had organized the dishwashing with a beat that made the work look like dancing.

"You're doing well," Ashburn said, leaning on the service counter.

Kainat shrugged. "I'm getting there. But small things still sting. The rival's men planted the rumor that our food came from cheap packets. Some people believed it. It took only a day for a seed of doubt to grow." She looked at the crowd, then at him. "When their sponsor left the city, more came back. But trust isn't fixed by one man leaving. It's fixed by time."

"To time and stew," Ashburn said with a grin. "And maybe a better signboard."

She snorted. "You and your signboards."

They shared a small laugh, then turned to hand out plates. The rhythm of giving flowed quietly — an honest counter to the spectacle of fame and corruption which had briefly stolen space in Ashrock.

Later that night, after the last bowl had been cleared, Kainat walked Ashburn to the edge of the narrow lane. The market lights reflected on puddles; a couple argued gently as a street vendor packed his stall.

"You really think the system will keep helping us?" she asked softly.

Ashburn looked up at the sky, pinprick stars swallowed a little by city glow. "The system does what systems do — it rewards patterns. But this? This is people. When people notice something true, it lasts."

She looked at him with a quiet gratitude. "Then thank you— for the things you did. For bringing those papers, for not letting us drown."

He shrugged, slight and human. "You did most of the work. I just cleaned the mess after."

They stood a heartbeat in the dark, two people who had reshaped trust in a small corner of their city.

At home that night, Ashburn opened his notebook and wrote the numbers carefully. He tallied the cycle again, noting the share he'd put aside: ₹10,400. He made a separate line for his total savings: ₹20,000 — a small, steady nest.

The system pulsed one last time before sleep, bracketed text drifting like a whisper.

> [System Note: "Every small victory is a foundation stone. Do not rush the tower."]

He breathed out, closing the book. The next four months felt long and bright. There would be decisions and tiny risks, suppliers and delivery runs, nights of counting and mornings of stacking. But for now, the city was softer. Kainat's charity hummed. The market trusted again — slowly, carefully.

Ashburn leaned back on the cot and let the quiet be enough.

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