I've been thinking about Rewriting the story because throughout all these chapters, I feel like I don't really have a plot line, and I kind of set myself up for failure with having him be an abstract at the beginning of the universe because he really can't involve himself in the plot all that much. So I might rewrite the story and try to make it so he doesn't have as many restrictions on him, so he can actually interact with the characters.
So I might rewrite the story and try to make it so he doesn't have as many restrictions on him, so he can actually interact with the characters properly.
So while I try to figure out how to do this, I would love to hear your guys suggestions and please try to be constructive and not just hate.
So if you guys have any suggestions, please write them in the comments. I love y'all. You guys are the best.
And on that note, it's time for my ass to go to bed
Be Seeing You,
Paradise_Lostt