I saw a lot of potential in super gene for a good fanfic I've already read most of the fanfic most of those are filled with heram and an mc who is too strong so I'm writing something of my own, if you think i can improve in anything at all please do comment. thank you.
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A young man was walking down a familiar street, carrying groceries back to his apartment. It was a decent place—neither luxurious nor shabby, just comfortably in between.
As he strolled along the path he had walked countless times before, he suddenly heard a cry for help. The scream pierced the air. It was high-pitched, desperate—a child's voice, no older than twelve.
"Help me! Someone, ple—"
The cry was abruptly cut off.
he looked around but no one else was able to hear that voice he asked some people walking if they heard the voice of a girl screaming, they denied hearing anything. Startled, he tried to locate the source. It was coming from an alley—one he had never noticed before. That was strange. He had passed through this street nearly every day, yet this alley had never been there. Brushing the unease aside, he sprinted toward it. It might not have been the smartest decision, but it felt like the only thing he could do.
As he ran, he reached for his phone to call the police, but it slipped from his hand and clattered to the ground behind him. He didn't stop. The alley was unusually dark. Though it was still broad daylight, no sunlight reached inside, and the place was eerily empty.
Deeper into the alley, he finally saw her—A child. She had crimson red eyes and pale, almost yellowish-white hair. He didn't dwell on her strange appearance.
"Are you alright?" he asked, kneeling to untie the ropes that bound her hands.
The girl was finally free. But the moment their eyes met, something shifted. The young man felt an overwhelming drowsiness take over. His limbs weakened, and the world blurred. The last thing he saw was the child's unsettling smile.
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Jack awoke in... nothingness?
That was the only word that came to mind. There was no ground, no sky—just an infinite void. Suddenly, the same child appeared, gliding effortlessly through the emptiness. Though the surroundings denied any explanation, Jack instinctively knew she was flying.
"You shall be my entertainment," she said with a grin.
Despite the fear twisting in his chest, Jack forced himself to stay calm. "Who are you?"
"Who I am doesn't matter," the child replied. "i have something for you,Something that you'll certainly like."
"What do you mean?" Jack asked cautiously. For some reason, he sensed that any other question would be useless.
"You will be reborn into the world of Super Gene. I'll grant you three wishes... and a system."
Her voice was casual, but the certainty in her tone made it clear—this wasn't a proposal. It was a declaration. She was simply letting him know what came next.
"Why me?" Jack asked, even though a strange sixth sense told him the answer wouldn't matter.
"I won't answer that," she said coldly. "Just tell me your three wishes, and you'll be reborn."
Her voice echoed with a strange authority. For a brief moment, Jack felt a chill run through his veins. This was terrifying he if possible would like to never experienced this ever again. This was like something pulled from the pages of manga or the novels he used to read.
A mix of fear and excitement stirred in him. Still wary, he asked, "Are there any limits on the wishes?"
That sixth sense—the one that had awakened the moment he entered this void—didn't warn him off the question.
Clearly pleased the child said. "I see the gift I gave you is working. You mustn't ask for anything too overpowered. Each wish must have a condition—something that balances its power."
She must be talking about this strange intuition, Jack thought. This sense of what's right or wrong to ask for.
But little did he know, it was far more than a mere intuition.
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End of chapter 1.