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Deep Concussion

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“He thought he knew himself… until the shadow appeared. Now, silence is his enemy. And peace? Just another lie.
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Chapter 1 - Deep Concussion

Deep Concussion

I - The Arrival of the Shadow

I met him where I meet all my thoughts: In the corridor behind my eyes.

He wasn't real. But then again, neither was I.

A silhouette. Black, yet undefined. A shape standing at the far end of my mind's hallway. Silent. Watching.

Waiting.

Every time I closed my eyes, I found him closer.

I told myself it was just stress. Just exhaustion.

But shadows don't move without purpose.

II - First Conversation

The first time he spoke, it wasn't with words. It was with weight.

A heaviness pressed against my skull, forcing me to look down, forcing me to listen.

Then came the whisper:

"Why are you pretending?"

I didn't answer. Not because I refused... But because I didn't know what he meant.

Or maybe I did. And I was terrified.

III - The Room with No Walls

One night, I found myself in the room.

Page 2It wasn't a dream. It wasn't memory.

It was a space. Endless, yet claustrophobic. Dark, yet suffocatingly clear. A room that smelled like regret.

He stood there, the shadow. Waiting.

I asked him, for the first time:

"Who are you?"

He smiled. I felt it. Not on his face. But in my bones.

"I'm what you buried."

IV - Unraveling

Each night, he peeled layers off me.

Not skin. Beliefs.

He questioned everything:

My fear? A lie.

My morality? A mask.

My prayers? Survival mechanisms.

He didn't argue. He just... stood there.

And the silence between us shattered me more than words could.

I hated him. I hated that he knew. I hated that part of me wanted him to win.

V - Collapse

One night, I stopped speaking.

I sat in that room with him.

Breathing. Existing. Not fighting anymore.

I looked at him, truly looked, and realized:

Page 3He wasn't a stranger. He wasn't my enemy.

He was the version of me I didn't let exist.

The part of me that accepted the fall. That stopped resisting.

I envied him. Because he looked at peace.

VI - The Choice

He spoke, one final time.

"Join me."

No threats. No promises.

Just... invitation.

And for the first time, I asked myself:

What if peace wasn't on the other side of resistance?

What if peace... was surrender?

VII - The Ending That Wasn't

In the end, I didn't choose.

Or maybe I did.

I woke up, every morning, unsure if I was myself... Or the shadow wearing my skin.

I moved. I worked. I laughed.

But inside, I existed in that room. With him. Not as prisoner. Not as visitor. But as part of him.

And every night, before sleep claims me, I hear his voice:

"Welcome home."

The End.