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Chapter 8 - Chapter 8 :Fundamentals of Swordsmanship Part 4

Focus can paralyze

The late afternoon sun filtered through the branches of the old maple behind the dojo. Cicadas buzzed lazily in the summer heat, their song blending with the distant sound of wooden swords clashing in the training yard.

Under the shade of the tree, Koushirou sat cross-legged on the grass. Zoro, still catching his breath from sparring, plopped down across from him.

"Close your eyes," Koushirou said, his voice calm as still water.

Zoro frowned. "Why? I'm not tired—"

"This isn't rest. This is training."

Reluctantly, Zoro obeyed.

Koushirou's tone took on a quiet, steady rhythm. "Focus all your mind on a single thought. When you think of rain… you must only see rain. Not the trees it lands on, not the clouds it falls from. Only the rain itself. Every drop."

Zoro tried. He pictured the silver streaks falling from the sky… but then he saw them splashing on the dojo roof. The image shifted to the smell of wet earth. Then to the clouds.

His brow furrowed. "Tch… I can't keep it."

Koushirou didn't open his eyes. "Because you're letting your thoughts wander. Your mind must be like the edge of a blade — straight, unbroken, and cutting toward one purpose."

They sat in silence for several moments. The sound of cicadas faded in Zoro's awareness as he returned to the image of rain. Just rain. Nothing else.

For a brief, fleeting instant, the world in his mind narrowed to only that — droplets falling endlessly.

Koushirou opened his eyes and studied him. "Better. Focus is the root of all swordsmanship. Without it, your strikes scatter. Your guard falters. Your will wavers."

Zoro cracked one eye open. "So… this leads to fighting better?"

"Eventually. But more than that…you can reach a level where true focus can stop a fight before it happens"

'Can stop a fight before it happens, how can that be possible 'Zoro thought to himself .

The Weight of a Gaze

That evening, the dojo was quiet. The younger students had gone home, leaving only Zoro and Koushirou.

Kyoshiro stood in the center of the floor. "Zoro, today you learned the seed of focus. Now I will show you one of its fruits — killing intent."

Zoro tilted his head. "That's… just glaring hard at someone, right?"

Koushirou's voice stayed calm, but there was a steel edge beneath it. "No. Killing intent is the projection of your will to cut… so sharp, so certain, that the enemy feels your blade before it moves."

He gestured for Zoro to stand at the far end of the dojo. "Draw your sword."

Zoro gripped his bokken and waited.

Koushirou didn't move. He simply stood with his hand resting lightly on the hilt of his katana.

Then something shifted. The air seemed to thicken. Zoro felt an invisible weight pressing down on him, cold and heavy. His throat tightened. Every instinct screamed at him to raise his guard — yet Koushirou hadn't taken a single step.

"You feel it," Koushirou said softly, his eyes locked on Zoro's. "That is the mind's blade. Focus so absolute it cuts without striking. Against weaker men, this alone will freeze them. Against stronger ones, it will steal precious seconds… enough to end the fight."

Just as suddenly as it came, the feeling vanished. Zoro realized he'd been holding his breath.

Koushirou sheathed his blade and turned away. "The body follows the mind. When your mind is sharp enough, even stillness becomes a weapon."

Zoro gripped his bokken tighter . He wanted that skill. No – he needed that skill.

Sometime later

"Did the village move places or something "Zoro said in annoyance . He had been looking for it for hours

The sun had already dipped below the treeline, and the forest was cloaked in deep shadows. Zoro, now a few miles from Shimotsuki Village, had—unsurprisingly—lost his way again.

"Great… just great," he muttered, brushing aside low-hanging branches. His stomach grumbled, but hunger wasn't his main concern. It was the sound—a deep, guttural growl that rolled through the trees like distant thunder.

Zoro stopped. Slowly, his eyes tracked the movement in the darkness ahead. From between two massive cedar trunks emerged a hulking bear, its matted fur catching the faint light of the moon. The animal stood taller than Zoro, its claws glinting like jagged steel.

For a heartbeat, they simply stared at each other—predator and prey. Then the bear roared, charging with a speed that belied its bulk.

Zoro's hand flew to Wado Ichimonji's hilt.

"Steady your stance. Control your breath. Read your opponent."

Koushirou's voice echoed in his mind.

He inhaled deeply, lungs expanding, then let the air out slow. His blade sang as it left its sheath, and he stepped forward to meet the attack. Steel clashed with claw as Zoro redirected the first swipe, pivoting to avoid the second.

But the bear was relentless. Every strike of its paw felt like a sledgehammer, every step shaking the earth beneath them. Zoro's muscles burned from the effort of dodging and countering, and sweat stung his eyes.

"If you are not stronger than the opponent and its obvious don't fight the opponent's strength. Use it against them," Koushirou had once said during sparring. Zoro tried—redirecting swipes, slashing at openings—but his blade barely cut through the beast's thick hide.

The bear lunged again, this time so close that Zoro felt the rush of hot, rancid breath.

Kuina's voice:

"Don't just swing—cut with purpose. See the strike before it happens."

"Ignore the noise. Ignore the world. See only the cut."

Zoro closed his eyes for a split second, letting everything fade—the wind, the trees, even the pounding of his own heart. In that stillness, he pictured it: the line of the cut, clean and absolute, running through the bear.

When his eyes snapped open, they burned with focus. His killing intent surged out like a tidal wave, crashing into the bear. The beast froze mid-step, its muscles locking as if some unseen force had bound it.

The world turned Grey and all that could be heard was Zoro's heartbeat and the rustling of trees . Zoro's voice rang out in the silence of the Grey world

"The ego of the entropic world shall be wrent in Twain "

The next moment, Zoro moved.

He didn't think. He simply stepped into the cut he had already envisioned, his blade flashing in the moonlight. Time seemed to stretch, the world holding its breath.

One sword style :Rashomen

Then—silence.

Zoro stood behind the bear, Wado Ichimonji sliding back into its sheath with a sharp click. For a moment, nothing happened. Then a thin red line appeared along the bear's torso, widening as blood spilled out in a dark torrent. The giant collapsed with a heavy thud, shaking the ground one final time.

Zoro looked over his shoulder, eyes calm, breathing steady.

"Guess I'm not completely lost after all," he muttered, turning to continue his journey deeper into the forest.

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