Dear Readers,
Thank you for taking the time to explore my story, which is being developed in a Visual-Novel Style. As the creator, I put a lot of effort into crafting each scene with vivid details to make the world immersive and emotionally engaging. While the chapters may be short, they're intentionally designed to deliver impactful moments in a compact format — just like the beats of a visual novel.
However, I'm still refining the overall flow and pacing of the scenarios, and I'd truly appreciate your honest feedback and suggestions.
• Do the scenes feel immersive to you?
• Are the transitions between moments smooth enough?
• Is the pacing effective, or do you feel the chapters are too short or too fast?
• Is the visual-novel format working well for this kind of story?
Your feedback — even just a few thoughts — can really help me shape this story into something stronger and more memorable. Whether you're a casual reader or someone deeply into this genre, I'd love to hear from you.
Thank you again for your support, and I hope you'll continue this journey with me.
With gratitude,
JD_Suthir