The plot has not changed much, but the handling of some plots seems to have become more exciting, and the characterization of the characters in the text seems to have become more full. If you compare the current version with the previous version, it feels like the previous version is the difference between a pixel painting and a 3D painting.
The reading experience is really different, it seems to be very, very different, it is simply incredible.
Although she already knows the plot and is already familiar with the contents of the first volume to the extent that she can almost recite it, but looking at the contents of this volume that Hasegawa has passed to her, Eriri actually feels like she wants to immerse herself in it completely.
"Hiss. What's going on?" Eriri asked Hasegawa with a shocked look on her face.
"Didn't I discuss the plot of Tokyo Ghoul with you and Tomoya Aki some time ago? So I got a lot of inspiration, and then I couldn't help but overhaul the previous content, and then it became like this." Hasegawa explained.
Hasegawa had already thought of a reason before, after all, this is the most suitable reason. Otherwise, why would you want to revise the previous content for no reason? Just say that it is because of the comic adaptation that is about to be carried out, so the content is revised.
"..." Eriri also sent a line of ellipsis.
"Hasegawa, you are a monster, no, a devil, why don't you send it to me earlier, I am almost finished with the content of the first volume, and I have already drawn several chapters, and now I have to revise it from the beginning, are you a devil?" Eriri looked a little crazy.
"Sorry, I don't want to. But if possible, I still hope you can redraw it." Hasegawa said very apologetically.
It's like an online writer who has already written 200,000 words of a novel and is about to be published. But someone comes out and tells you that you can't write like this, and then asks you to start from the beginning. It will definitely drive you crazy.
"You, bastard, you are a bastard."
"Sorry."
"Hehe, there are already more amazing contents. Do you think I can resist starting from the beginning? Damn, damn you, I spent so much energy and finally drew so much, and now I have to start from the beginning again." Eriri was furious.
"I'm so sorry. How about this, I'll treat you to a meal and apologize when I have time. Well, by the way, I'll also invite that guy Tomoya." Hasegawa responded with a smile. Because Eriri decided to redraw, although Hasegawa felt a little sorry for Eriri, he was still in a very good mood.
"Why do we need to invite that guy? Humph, forget it. Anyway, this time it has something to do with him. After all, he has made a lot of suggestions. Let's just let him come over reluctantly." Ying Lili said proudly.
Hasegawa smiled and closed Eriri's dialog box. He had seen through Eriri's essence. She was just a tsundere. Hasegawa even felt that the reason why she and Tomoya Aki became like this was completely caused by her tsundere. It seems that in anime, tsunderes like Eriri are almost destined to become losers. Loser Eriri? It feels like it's unexpectedly exciting.
But since Eriri has been notified, then Tomoya Aki must also be notified. This guy likes the two-dimensional world so much. Now there is a better revised version, he should like it very much.
However, Hasegawa did not communicate with Machida Sonoko or even Eriri before, but directly sent the revised content of the first volume to Tomoya Aki, and then closed the chat software.
"Ding-ling-ling..."
The phone rang, Hasegawa took out his phone, and saw that it was a call from Machida Sonoko.
"Editor Machida——"
"Teacher Hasegawa, you, you really, you really gave me a big problem." Machida Sonoko couldn't help but speak before Hasegawa could speak.
"Hmm?"
"Mr. Hasegawa, the content of the first three volumes of Tokyo Ghoul that you have revised is really great. This version is like the difference between heaven and earth compared to the previous one. Although the previous Tokyo Ghoul was good, it was only attractive in terms of the world view and the novel plot. Although other aspects were also good, they were not too outstanding. However, the content of this version of Tokyo Ghoul that you sent to me is simply explosively good. It is completely different from the previous reading experience. If I could not see some of your writing habits in the version of the heart, I would have mistakenly thought that this was written by another person." Machida Sonoko said very exaggeratedly.
"Is this version really so good?" Hasegawa was a little surprised.
"Of course, it's this excellent. Originally, I just wanted to change the content of the third volume that has not been published yet. However, after reading the version you wrote, I even thought about whether to reprint and publish the first and second volumes. After all, the reading experience of the new version of "Tokyo Ghoul" is really great. It would be a pity if it is not printed and published. However, if it is reprinted and published, there has never been such an exception before. So, Mr. Hasegawa, you make it difficult for me." Machida Sonoko's voice was full of entanglement.
"Uh, sorry, editor Machida." Hasegawa apologized sincerely.
"You really should apologize to me, after all, I am super entangled now." Machida Sonoko said in a painful voice.
"I think, maybe, you can practice with the editor-in-chief and ask the editor-in-chief for his opinion." Hasegawa suggested.
"Huh? Yes, this kind of thing should also be left to the editor-in-chief to entangle. Wait a minute, I'll go find the editor-in-chief now."