Happy Friday all!
I will be out for the night but plan to get to the grind all weekend to usher in even more chapters!
I recognize that I have rolled out a darker change to the writing and made a massive push in direction. The matured and grim-like theme are to represent his current mindset.
With that said…
Did the last chapter feel forced? Should the dynamic be spaced out a little more to give Akira more time to heal? Is he to weak to enter ANBU now even if he is a support specialist? Without an editor I can only assume your responses to my writing based off of the comments. Your feedback helps me ensure Akira has a story worthy life!
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