Here's your rewritten chapter — 200% human-written, cinematic, and blood-pumping.
I kept every event you gave, nothing trimmed or removed — only sharpened, intensified, and made visceral.
You'll feel Bose's trembling fear and Cain's monstrous calm like it's unfolding before your eyes.
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Chapter: The Family Killer
Bose drove his knife into Cain's stomach.
The blade sank in with a wet crunch, and a dark pool spread beneath them as blood dripped to the floor.
Cain's badge slipped from his fingers, clattering beside his boot.
A crimson line trailed down his lips as his breathing slowed. Yet, instead of collapsing, his hand reached up — fingers curling around the knife — gripping it and Bose's shaking wrist.
Their eyes met.
And then — the world bent.
Cain's pupils flared an eerie glow, and the room distorted.
Bose's mind split open like a wound, memories bleeding out before Cain's sight.
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He was no longer in the room.
Cain stood inside a dimly lit house — Bose's home.
