In his spare time, Uesugi Sakura would pick up a pen to continue drafting his novel. Would adjusting the sentences here improve it? Would describing the roadside trees' type more clearly enhance the immersion?
It was his first time drafting a novel, and without a mentor to guide him, it was like crossing a river by feeling the stones.
"Uesugi-kun... are you writing a novel again?"
"Yes." Uesugi Sakura nodded, looking up to see Kobashi Rikai standing beside him. She had just finished making a cup of coffee for a customer.
"By the way, about the draft I gave you last time, could you share your impressions?"
"Impressions...?" Kobashi Rikai looked at Uesugi Sakura, "I can't help feeling Uesugi-kun is a very ruthless person."
This evaluation...
Uesugi Sakura was a bit intrigued and continued to ask, "How so?"
