Sure, here is the translation based on your guidelines:
Although Qiuye has grown considerably during this time, there is still a huge gap between her and Kula Doreen.
The wet foot dragged a mark on the deck as Qiuye barely steadied herself.
Kula Doreen's sword strike came suddenly, leaving Qiuye little time to react. She mobilized all her strength to barely withstand Kula Doreen's blow.
Raising her head, Qiuye fixed her gaze on Kula Doreen's figure, ready to face her father's next attack.
However, Kula Doreen slowly sheathed his blade, showing no sign of emotion on his face: "You did quite well."
"Even though you were driven by emotions, your body still reacted swiftly. Qiuye, I must admit, you're quite outstanding.
Let's consider that sudden attack as a test.
You passed the test, so I'll give you a chance.
But acting alone is indeed too dangerous.
Let's go together."
"But..."
