Hello everyone!! I want your opinion. I thought about this a lot. As you can tell this story have many mistakes and lose starting point. Even the story become good right now. But it can't change the plot holes.
So I thought about this and decided. I want to Rewrite this story from Start. Please give me your opinions. Because this type story takes long run. If the foundation of the story is weak then it will collapse in future. I didn't think much when I started writing this story but now I can see or understand how much a story will get better with good foundation.
I will decide after 2 days
So please comment.
Thanks everyone who reading my story. I really want to make good story. I appreciate everyone support.