This is my first fanfic critisism is welcomed

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Synopsis:
A soul drifts away from the cycle of reincarnation and into the void, something that has never happened before. A large amount of time passes with nothing happening, until an entity appears before the soul. Read to find out more.

Current world: DxD

Finished worlds: Arifureta

Cover is not mine 
Characters and the original story in this fanfic are also not mine all credit goes to their respective creators.

I will say this now this novel is pretty cliché, I am not forcing you to read. If you’re dissatisfied about the direction, flow or any other aspect of the novel you are free to leave and if you choose to leave a comment on the way out please make it helpful, and not something you wrote just to be hurtful. Please enjoy.

Also mc is strong since chap 4 be warned
Also, try to read until the start of Tortus before leaving criticism 
AU elements

Someone mentioned the useless of the sharingan in this fic and the fact that it is overused and I admit thats true so in the upcoming chapters it will be changed, if you have any suggestions please comment.


Chapter 7 - Changes